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Title: The Subtleties of Color
Pairing: Urameshi Yusuke x Minamino Shuichi (Kurama)
Fandom: Yu Yu Hakusho
Rating: R

In honor of Valentine's Day, I bring you a short, sweet piece, written for the [livejournal.com profile] 30_kisses challenge "red". It's pretty tame, there's no explicit scenes or anything, just mentions of the dirty things two demons get up to when they're alone. Also, Kuwabara makes another guest appearance, because damn, I love that boy.

Comments and criticisms are encouraged. Enjoy!


If asked what the color red means to him, Urameshi Yusuke is likely to retort by asking his questioner if they’ve ever been tested for insanity. If pressed, his answer comes short and sharp: one word, three letters. To him, the best images of red come from the fire-engine gloss of a woman’s full lips, the sleek scarlet of a thigh-baring dress.

More recently, red has also come to mean the elegant spill of Kurama’s hair over the pillow, the silken cinch of a favorite tunic about the fox-demon’s slender waist. Red is the color that bleeds steadily into Yusuke’s vision as he thrusts roughly into the warm body beneath him.

If asked what the color red means to him, Minamino Shuichi – Kurama only to a select few – answers with something immediate and complex: passion. As a scholar and – more importantly, really – as a teenage boy, he understands the sexual connotations well, but to him, red has always meant something more.

It is the color of red-haired Kuwabara’s Code, strong and brave and true. It is the blood spat to the side and wiped carelessly off the chin in the midst of battle, disregarded in the intensity of the struggle. It is the heat and power of Hiei’s fire, the life and death enshrined in his own precious flowers.

But perhaps the best visualization he can present of exactly what red means to him is the light flush of arousal that ripples across Yusuke’s skin at Kurama’s touches, the half-demon’s grasping fingers tangled in his own crimson tresses as their bodies press and strain in the dark of night.

Yet unseen and unknown to all – except, perhaps, one Kuwabara Kazuma, who has always had an uncanny knack for detecting that which remains unseen by the natural perception of human senses – red is the precise and perfect color of the bond they share, half-demon and whole: the clear, intense love of a child’s Valentine.

-EDIT- Crossposted to [livejournal.com profile] 30_kisses

Date: 2007-02-14 09:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chucklingcorpse.livejournal.com
Valentine's Day. Good day for good prOn ficcage. Nicely, and very Yuusuke too.

Date: 2007-02-15 01:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-flamewing.livejournal.com
Good for pr0n ficcage, and little else. Or maybe that's just me being bitter... Yeah, that might be it.

Anyway, I'm glad you thought it was in-character. I have a pretty hard time writing Yusuke.

Date: 2007-02-15 02:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chucklingcorpse.livejournal.com
Yuusuke is a pretty tough guy to write down. His random nature is pretty unpredictable.


Valentine's Day is meant for spending cash, bad hole in the wallet.

Date: 2007-08-01 11:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] minorke.livejournal.com
Oddly enough, I find that Yusuke is the easiest for me to keep in character. I have a terrible time keeping Hiei IC, Kuwabara is pretty easy and Kurama likewise. I suppose it's because I can relate to those three the best but Hiei... I have a hard time forcing myself to see the world through eyes that view nothing but pain.

(Acccidently poetic) >.

Date: 2007-08-02 04:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-flamewing.livejournal.com
It's funny you should say that (and don't mind while I now wax poetic in reciprocation), because I'm almost entirely the other way. I have such a hard time with Yusuke, I think, because I want to make him so much deeper than he actually is. He's so carefree, and ridiculous, and completely silly sometimes, and I just have so little experience with a life like that.

On the other hand, characters like Kurama and Kuwabara (and, to a certain extent Hiei) who have much deeper characters, and who have experienced a certain amount of pain are much easier for me to relate to.

And now it sounds like I have this awful life, which is not the case at all. I just don't see myself as much as a Yusuke-type character as a Kurama-type character, I guess.

I'm rambling.

Date: 2007-08-02 08:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] minorke.livejournal.com
No, I'm facinated. I'm more of a Yusuke type than anything, which is funny because I'm absolutely in LOVE with Yusuke (I'm allowed to pick one who isn't as hot, I'm gay remember?) But from what you've written, I'm guessing you like them all anyway. Especially Kuwabara. I love him too. (which I guess is because I'm such a Yusuke-type, I think Kuwabara and Yusuke are soul mates >.< Squee!) but I like all the pairings. As long as it's two (or more *sigh*) of the main four guys, I'm glad.

Date: 2007-08-03 01:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-flamewing.livejournal.com
I absolutely love them all. Especially Kuwabara, though he just misses out on being my favorite (like, by fractions of an inch) because Kurama is just so damn sarcastic sometimes.

I've a soft spot for Yusuke/Kuwabara, too, actually, though I've never written it. But it's definitely one of my guilty pleasures.

As long as it's two (or more *sigh*) of the main four guys, I'm glad.

Amen to that. I have the exact same mindset. Though pairings of side characters can be equally enjoyable. I, myself, am a die-hard Jin/Touya shipper.

Date: 2007-08-03 03:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] minorke.livejournal.com
yeah, I've recently started reading Jin/Touya stuff, it's cute depending on who writes it. Oh speaking of which, have you read/seen some of Arigatomina's stuff? She has her own website full of Yaoi crap and it's all amazing!!! Nothing sub-par whatsoever although her website is down so none of her piccy's are up *groans* but hey...

anyway, perfect quote of Kurama sarcasm:

Kuwabara(after Hiei's sword is shattered in dark tournament against Kuromomotaro) Hey, what the heck happened to his sword?

Kurama: I think it broke.

So even Kurama get's sick of Kuwabara's baka-isms sometimes..

Date: 2007-08-03 06:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-flamewing.livejournal.com
I haven't seen any of it, no, but it definitely sounds like it might be worth checking out. Thanks for the tip!

Date: 2007-08-04 04:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] minorke.livejournal.com
No problem. I just wish the pics were up. ArigatouMina is amazing.

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